That was fantastic!
Especially for a first submission to Newgrounds, I really enjoyed it, along with the game. You should continue to submit more content!
Not bad for a first work!
A lot of people here seem to be forgetting that this is indeed your first flash movie. Granted, it could be improved with a little better art, voicing rather than slightly unclear text, and an improved replay.. I liked it.
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